What I could Improve on my Blogs

Looking at the quality of my blogs I think I am lacking screenshots when necessary, my teacher has also told me that I have to start taking screen shots as it would improve the quality of my work. Another thing that could be improved in my blogs is that I could use more examples, e.g: researching shots that were used in a film and link it to my work, as it is another area that I find I am weak in.